| Reviews for The Heart |
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lateVMlover chapter 24 . 6/21/2018 This story is too cheesy and depthless to be written by Rowlings. The connections and bonds were formed WAY TOO FAST. The most interesting characters, Willow, Tara, and Snape are given no time. This is all high school drama, so I'm assuming you were a teenager when you wrote this. On a plus sight, the writing is technically sound with little mistakes in grammar and mechanics. |
Guest chapter 20 . 11/5/2017 Your annoying author notes are ruining this story, btw. |
NhaTrang chapter 1 . 4/4/2016 What do I think? I think this is written to the comprehension level of your average semi-literate 12 year old, and it took me about five sentences to be certain of it. |
Netchka chapter 1 . 4/14/2015 Interesting. Reading more. |
MMWillow13 chapter 31 . 6/22/2012 This was great! Whether you meant it to be funny or not it was a complete scream! |
MMWillow13 chapter 22 . 6/22/2012 ROFL I love Xander and here I was waiting for Dawn to say something like "this is your arch enemy, wow uglier than Harmony, but not a heck of a lot smarter ... I mean evil for dummies oh god even Harmony didn't resort to that. At least I had a hell god after me." |
M chapter 6 . 8/14/2011 Yes. Spike is hot. I had a crush on him- even though he's fictional- until Andrew popped up. Andrew's gay for warren and Spike, although he didn't seem to mind Katrina either. |
M chapter 26 . 8/7/2011 Tree haters. |
M chapter 30 . 7/27/2011 May I remind you that Willow is GAY! |
M chapter 6 . 7/27/2011 WHO THE BLOODY FLIPPIN' HELL WOULD LET SPIKE TEACH? I MEAN, HE'S, WELL, SPIKE! |
M chapter 4 . 7/27/2011 Draco and Ginny sitting in a tree... |
M chapter 1 . 7/27/2011 Evil For Dummies. Really? |
M chapter 30 . 7/25/2011 NOT WILLOW/SNAPE! I HATE THAT GREASY MORON! |
Snape M chapter 27 . 7/25/2011 If you die, Potter, you are SOO flunking potions! |
M chapter 26 . 7/25/2011 DEATH TO THE TREES, POTTER! |