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There should be a page listing all of the beta readers on this site. I am a beta myself, but I mainly focus on grammar and spelling, rather than adding content to the story. Sure, some of my fixes can add 100 words or more, but that's not quite the same.

Great story but it use a editor

Interesante historia deberías de continuar con está genial historia .
Sabes creo que podrías hacer que shirou tenga el acceso a las 5 grandes magias y entre al trono de los hereos y saque a algunos hereos de hay como serían : Isthar ( Rin ) , Artemisa, Medea, Medusa, Arturia-lancer , scathash, yurimitsu y Nero para su harem , ya pondrías a otras chicas pr que serían muy débiles para los estándares de shirou/ghilgamesh .
Y podrían ver Medea vs Afrodita(oc) , Medusa vs athena(op) y otras peleas interesantes .
Has podrías hacer que varias dioses de diferentes panteones entren en batalla contra shirou . Ejemplo Loki, Thor, Ares, Apolo y tsukuyomi entre otros .

not bad I'm liking where this is going

nice story so far

I would really suggest getting a Beta reader as it will improve the quality of your work. If I can be of any help with this let me know.

Trife

Interesting very interesting , somehow its a bit to short

Interesting concept.. Looking forward to d next chapter

And done, *follow* trus fucking nice fanfiction

This needs a Beta.

Heh, as long as you don't quit before Shirou became a Campione, we're good.

good chapter

I hope ths Shirou gets to kill Verethragna and replace Goudou...All author of CampionexFate crossover always make the protagonist exist alongside Godou so the story becomes needlesly complicated