It's interesting how you're working these new revelations about Bella into the original text (like Eric by her truck). Given the pace of this story versus the number of chapters, it is obvious we aren't going to get very far into Twilight with this story, and I noticed that, unfortunately, there is only this one story and an incomplete second one in this series. So, I'm guessing we aren't going to get to learn everything about this Bella. :( (I'd love to hear Charlie's reactions to many scenes in Eclipse and Breaking Dawn, and, of course, the wolves would no doubt by excited once they got into New Moon and beyond - though Sam and Jacob might squirm at some of the actions of their "future" selves ...lol).

I've really been enjoying these last several chapters where you've gotten more into your original plot and the reactions to what they are reading.

Ok, I'm interested. :)

This doesn't seem finished.

Very interesting beginning! I like this so far! Thanks for writing!

This is awesome!

Okay so when I started reading this I was so excited because I truly love TRT stories. With that being said I was heartbroken that the didn't even make it to the first kiss. But I understand why and I can't wait to read the next part.

I'm loving the backstory and twists you are adding while keeping with canon Twilight history! Love it!

I love this series. I have read several twilight reading twilight stories. Yours is a favorite of mine. you add so many detail to the interactions between the groups. even the personal internal thoughts of the different pov bring new nuances to the characters. All the characters have such depth. The tweaking to Bella's background adds suprising new elements while staying true to the books. I really hope you continue this series. I can not wait to read more.

I would love to read that prequel. Although you have probably already made that decision, I still thought I would let you know.

Good chapter. But you have the day being sat at start then s school day with Jacob. Continuity is off.

Well that was certainly a unique twist that I did NOT see coming! You're doing an excellent (if somewhat unorthodox) "reading of Twilight", and doing a FANTASTIC job of weaving in very interesting side-plots!

You've had me laughing at all the different comments and interactions, and have done a splendid job of conveying the emotional rollercoaster that all the characters are going through. It's great to see all the characters banding together and developing a greater understanding of each other; I can hardly wait to see what happens next!

Well done and I look forward to reading the sequel. Thanks for sharing your God-given talent for writing!

loving the story! on to the next one

amazing job story, loving it

This story is Wonderful- normally I'm a Jasper & Bella girl- just cause in Canon Eddie is kinda a controlling jerk, and tbh Alice is the same way with Jasper. And lately I've been liking some Crossovers ( like your avengers/ twilight One!) in that case I really Love Captain America with Bella... But anyway it is cool seeing them read the books, but I think -and this is just an idea (I'd never tell a writer how to write their story) I think that the story would just be as effective if you "skipped" some of the book, maybe just have them summarize parts? Just an idea This is totally going on my Fav list! So thank you for writing this and sharing it with all of us!' Now I have to go read the sequel!