Reviews for A New Life |
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Kaiserreich chapter 11 . 7/21 so the genre of this fanfiction is: Action,Romance,Ecchi,Fantasy,Magic? |
albertocervantes569 chapter 23 . 5/24 please don't make raijin itachi's son |
albertocervantes569 chapter 7 . 5/23 while I wish itachi and izumi were not on the island (I wanted them to have a child by the time everyone came back) I do like how you made this story go the way it did. anyways I love what you have do with the story so far |
albertocervantes569 chapter 2 . 5/23 just a thought but couldn't you have had him train to learn his power in real time... this way you could have had him be OP at a later time(like the tournament arc or after the 2 year time skip) and have had him at around s class right off the get-go. this way you could this have the story be similar to the original story and make since... since now he is a broken(God like) character there should be nothing that could be a problem for him...in other words this story should just be him getting together with izumi and raising kids... these are just my thoughts since itachi isn't the type of character to leave enemies alive nor is he the type of character who would be careless and since he is OP no one should be able to actually harm him... these are just my thought and I don't me to trash talk your story i just wanted to give you my thoughts... ps. I like the idea of your story and can't wait to read more |
NobodyOwens5 chapter 1 . 3/20 too much stuff man, he was good enough with any tailed beasts. oh well, maybe you won't overuse them, though I sincerely hope you're not going to severely weaken him for plot convenience that is probably one of the things I hate the most. that and making oblivious dense main characters, because seriously, no one is that dense. |
DittoVonDegurechaff chapter 1 . 3/9 ... this is a bit overpowered |
AnimeLVAkame chapter 13 . 12/15/2019 Wow Total ghost rider line there when he took out Danzo |
RandomPasserby96 chapter 23 . 8/7/2019 This... this is way too confusing |
Kira007Goddess of Chaos chapter 2 . 7/21/2019 Like Itachi needs to be any more OP! Itachi without his illness is one of the 5 stronges shinobis of all times! Making him stronger makes not sense |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2019 Puta madre este itachi es el puto amo pero me parece inecesario q tenga magia si tiene chakra ademas ahora es mas poderoso q nunca :v |
Samuel Gomez chapter 21 . 12/27/2018 puta mierda de historia, y la mandaste a la mierda cuando decidiste darle a itachi el poder para viajar entre dimensiones |
Darth revan1998 chapter 23 . 12/6/2018 Please update |
DarkChaosDragon00 chapter 1 . 11/25/2018 Update already |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/20/2018 He’s too op though He can match acnologia. Or even defeat that dragon. |
Branwen Yang chapter 2 . 4/9/2018 It's spelled Porlyusica my man, please fix that. Also there's more errors in your grammar, but that can be easily fixed seeing it's not all that bad. |