ARE YOU DEAD?! WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU?!

Awesome

Best fanfic ive read in awhile... too bad you're gone. come back!

sick update

Not to be a downer but can anyone hear the snapping of a spider's thread? Without super hearing?

I’m currently rereading this fanfic and I must say it’s sad that Tony would stoop so low that he would torture someone just because of the fact that they have a symbiote that had bonded with someone (Peter) that started to use said symbiote to help others to be a hero to the citizens of New York without asking for wealth or fame just because he remembered what his Uncle Ben told him “With Great Power there must also come Great Responsibly”

Tony's behavior is more in line with a villain. And the reasoning was shoddy. Someone he can't control? Really? If the characters are going to be subjected to the worf effect, because yes even a symbiote instinct spiderman is going to have more problems than that although to be fair, they didn't know this was a modified version. But still, the fact remains a warning will be necessary if you're going to bash tony. Either that or get people's characters right. I know you're going for a harem story so even then behaviors are sketchy but that's for the females if I'm getting this right. unless you're telling me tony has a crush on this guy. Pariah sounds better for this prototype expy.

What the crap happened? You better get back here right now and finish this.

Wow! This story is so great. I was a little thrown off by the 14th chapter cuz your style completely changed, but it came together. Its been a while since you updated and I sincerely hope you do update this story soon. I love your portrayal of Peter and I hope to see more of Malice and the X-men. To be honest my favorite is Peter and Laura, so personally I think you should write in more scenes with Laura

Amazing! I would definitely like to leave Carol as a suggestion for a relationship, if votes are still able to be cast. Ooh, and I got an idea for peter’s appearance. Get back to me by PM or reply to this and I’ll see if I can send you a few things that came to mind. Other than hat, take any and all the time you need, school should take priority. Keep up the great work!

Damn just reaLuzed it’s been a while since you updated. I hope this story comes back with a bang soon

This is awesome! Love the take on peter with venom and spider powers

Please update

update man...it's been like 5 months

Streaks a dick