Amazing. Deep and stuff. love it.

aw...it's so cute!

Wow, I love the way that you took a minor charactor and showed all thoughts. I never would have thought that Lanny's thoughts would be like that! good work and keep on writin'!

'Tis a nice enough story and all, but there's just one thing wrong.

The theme in this story seems to be that there are so many things Lanny wants to tell Matt, but he can't 'cause he makes no sound. But you're forgetting that the general theme around Lanny is that even though he never speaks, Matt can still understand everything he means to say.

'Tis a nice enough story and all, but there's just one thing wrong.

The theme in this story seems to be that there are so many things Lanny wants to tell Matt, but he can't 'cause he makes no sound. But you're forgetting that the general theme around Lanny is that even though he never speaks, Matt can still understand everything he means to say.

'Tis a nice enough story and all, but there's just one thing wrong.

The theme in this story seems to be that there are so many things Lanny wants to tell Matt, but he can't 'cause he makes no sound. But you're forgetting that the general theme around Lanny is that even though he never speaks, Matt can still understand everything he means to say.

Poor Lanny!

;-; So sad... I feel so bad for Lanny Poor guy ;-;

Some answers to some questions. First off, I forgot to mention, they're older. They're about teenaged or so. Second off, why did I make them gay? Hey, it's my fic! In one fic, somebody reviewed that the actor is only like 10 years old and will feel bad. But, really, this is just made up. It never happened. Finally, I want to make a point that this really can be anyone(except Melina) I wanted to make it kinda no real identity, but I had Lanny in mind when I wrote this...

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!

you made them gay!

Nice. Like the use of repetition here. you captured Lanny's thoughts well.

~MP~