Not sure what those turds are talking about, but I think your writing is fantastic! It’s gotten me hooked from the beginning and I hope to see more chapters. I should be sleeping, but I just couldn’t put it down. Hope your doing well! Keep up the good work.

En lo personal me encanta lo que estas haciendo con la historia, esperare a que te sientas mejor para continuar, muchas gracias y no hagas caso de los comentarios negativos.

Hey I’m sorry people have sucked and been rude to you. I’m thankful for your story and look forward to you coming back to it but take all the time you need.

Que mal que las personas sientan que pueden criticar para mal el trabajo de los demás. Los que escriben lo hacen por diversión, porque les gusta un fandom y quieren compartir sus sentimientos y pensamientos con los demás. Espero que con tus otras historias puedas seguir adelante y cuando creas conveniente volver a esta historia aquí estaremos los que creemos que estás haciendo un excelente trabajo.

I love that she calls him on his shit. I am curious as to what the game will be.

I love your interpretation of Edward. It’s— *chef’s kiss*

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

So it's definitely been a while since I last read this and and I remember why I first started reading this book. I absolutely love how it's an OC and Edward and there is no Bella. She has her own gift. I enjoy her relationship with Charlie and cannot wait for the next update and so looking forward to her progress throughoutthe series.
I don't remember why I stopped reading But one reason is I never got an update on my set list on my phone which is diff from my tablet and even then I think you only updated so much.

I DEMAND MORREEEEeeeeeeeeeeeee

Err... Why do you keep referring Cyan with her last name?

Ah man this was so good! I loved this chapter. And I'm seriously so curious as to what happened with Cyan... It might have been a vampire but I really doubt it.
Can't wait for the next update!

I was so happy to see this new chapter posted! I loved it and I can't wait to read more!

Eww...Cyan better Not have a love traingle with Jacob in the future. I can't stand him! It was bad enough with Mary Sue...oops, I mean Bella...in the books.

Loving your story, so far. Can't wait to see how it all comes together. Eagerly awaiting your next.

really like this chapter and how her anger with her mother was expressed in a way that convinces your audience. The entire story plot captured my interested and enraptured me into the story. Well done with assimilating your OC into the movie plot, but putting your own twist on Cyan and not telling us what she is, makes the question more and more intriguing, which I hope you'll continue writing this story, so we can see further on the development between Cyan and her 'friendships.'

please continue with this fanfiction! it's really good and I hope to read the next chapter soon! great job and keep up the good work.

I really like this chapter! very well written and loved the Jake-Cyan interaction as well as the Cullen's first intros and Edward's aversion to Cyan. Incredibly detailed and the story pulls you in. excited to read the next chapter! please continue posting it and keep up the good work.