MY ANGEL GODDAMIT!
Great story btw

MY ANGEL GODDAMIT

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Uhhh, for starters, he's not your angel. He's mine. But I'm feeling kind today, so I suppose we can share.
And, yesss. Bobby Singer is the Izumi Curtis of Supernatural, and I love 'em both.

I knew I recognized that SPN reference. Good story btw

Woah ! This is amazing D
Nice way to end it, a thousand times better than your original end, this is really greaaaaat! Loved it 3
~DarkFlameFantasy

Aww! Ed and Roy's father / son moments are so sweet! XD Great story! XD

Aww, great job. But at the end...you reminded me of Hughes' death. Great chapter, it was so sweet. Too sweet. Sweet like the candy I'm eating...
Great job. I LOVE it :D

I honestly want another chapter and I thought that 'family doesn't end in blood' was from Game of Thrones but nope it's SPN

Aww just imagine Edward sneez like a cat, can make me die from cuteness!

Haha, I clicked on this without even realizing you wrote it. Then I saw the author name. XD Loved it.

That's actually pretty good I mean this seriously needs more!
The ending is just not satisfying at all ...
Hope you consider working more on this D ~DarkFlameFantasy

MOOOOOOORE

Sorry, but though I enjoyed this slightly, I couldn't really get past all of the hyphens you were using. Hyphens (these things -) are good and all, if you want to seem a little more professional, but you don't have to use them every single sentence.
For example: He walked - albeit slowly - to the truck.
VS
He slowly - walked - to the truck.
See the difference? I love the idea and everything, but maybe go easy on the hyphen key.
Besides that, it was really good so far! But please don't use more hyphens than necessary!

I wonder if Ed is gonna wake up to having a bad case of a cold or flu. I wonder what happens next. Looking forward to more! XD