Interesting plot! Good story, good grammar and punctuation, everything.

ooooo dark and heartbreaking. I like.

also this is a good one

you change some lyrics if you watch a lyric video on YouTube

its trash

No. Just noooooooo why do you have to kill me? UGGHHHH I LOVE THIS AND HATE IT AT THE SAME TIME! Duudddeeeeee Dipper's going to live a complete lie! OMg sorry I'm just ranting and stuff and yeah this was amazing bye

I've always wondered. If Stanley could be reminded of everything else doesn't that mean the possibility of Stanley remembering Bill therefor writing him back into existence

the feels be real

Whoa! This is one of the best 'Bill returns' stories I've read since the finale. There are literally no words to describe what I felt while reading this. Thanks for reading and reviewing my story, so doing the same for you is the least I could do. I just... wow this story is amazing in the most depressing way possible. The only character you missed was Robbie. You hit all of Dipper's reaction to the other's dying perfectly. You have no idea how much I cried. I cried a bit for McGucket, didn't really cry for Pacifica, but everyone else brought a new round of tears. I just... no words. Best 'Bill returns' story ever!

Oh my god, I did not see that coming! I was expecting Dipper to be say no and then defeat Bill, but your version is definitely more realistic and a lot better.

That took a very unexpected turn. I thought for sure Dipper was going to die with a smile on his face or something. But it turned into something completely different. I kinda' like it.

That was epic! With Dipper the last one standing against Bill and everyone he cared about dead, including Mabel and his Grunkles. You really stood out the others who fought and I even felt bad for Gideon (no mean feat).

Still, with Dipper facing certain defeat, Bill offers to put him in a dream bubble of sorts where he could be with Mabel and his friends for eternity. Dipper takes Bill's deal providing he can keep Mabel safe. But I wonder what his Grunkles and his friends would say about that.

And, would this mean that Bill would leave our world in peace just to play with the Mystery Twins? This story just begs for a follow-up of sorts.

This is one of the best "What if Bill Won" stories I've read in this fansite.