hello! I really hope you update this story... it's so different... I love everything about it. please update soon!

I just re-read your whole story and fell in love with it all over again. I really adore the way you write midnasnarky, sarcastic, and proud.
I can't wait to read your next update! the cliffhanger is killing me!

Man, I can't wait until this jackass gets his shit kicked in.

Had to make a review for this chapter since the guy below is probably shitposting, and for this neat fic, that's not okay! Your story is very, very comfy I must say. Reading about Midna dealing with living in some strange foreign land with the help of her only friend is awesome. It's not a grand adventure yet (or is it? ;D), but it's something different and interesting compared to the boring schlock posted on this site. Like I said, it's an awesome story because through Midna's struggles, I kinda see a little silver of me and can relate to the struggle. Please update as soon as possible, I really want to see how this all unfolds.

I would like to point out one thing: the man says that ordinary humans turn into beasts and spirit when exposed to twili magic. In the game, not one human or hylian turned into a beast, besides link because he had the triforce of courage.

Oh my god, I was so pumped when I saw you had updated and then I found two chapter, made my night. I'm loving this story, even tho its hurting me at the moment with Midna leaving and all that angst between her and Link.

It's so sad. But definitely a great chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

Anyone else accidentally read that last part as 'chopped spine'? No? Just me? Okay...

Great chapter, by the way. So glad I got back to this. And that you updated recently.

Man Midna that sucks, I'm rooting for you though!

You and Link OTP!

This chapter is so completely wrought with emotion, it was incredible to read.
I love this AU idea you had, it's fascinating, and it makes a tragic sort of sense that in order to live in the world of Light, Midna would have to give up everything that made her Twili.
I really don't know if you will have this story go down the path of her remembering, or with her choosing to live a new life. It doesn't feel cliched in the slightest, which is a rare thing when dealing with amnesiac-based plots- at least from what I've read.
Looking forward to your next update!
-Akira

Well this was better than I imagined! I love this story and how Midna and Link interact, I look forward to your next chapter, this is getting exciting and I do enjoy reading your amazing story. I can't imagine how worried Link must be for her, she could be in danger, yet there is no other way for her to go to Renaldo, a journey could help little their relationship.

Oh goodness! Link suspect she is Midna, yet he can't be sure! That must be frustrating for him, being so close yet do far, and worse for her! She does not have a memory and the sun is affecting her, maybe because of her twili form? I wonder how much time has passed since the ending of Twilight Princess?

Ah really!? That was bad! That was a good moment for them, what happened to Midna, it was a memory? Too bad they could no talk anymore, but it was worth it. Does Link suspect is really Midna? Hoa can he confirm that or better help her to regain some of her memories.

Yeah stupid sun indeed Midna, this so good to read! I did enjoy this chapter, I love how you write Midna, I get confused sometimes but it because I'm not used to first person while reading, but must say I'm enjoying it, is surprising too! Because I like the way Midna describes things and her attitude is great too!

This quest to recover her memories could help them both, not only her but Link too in way. Now this chapter was so good to read! Their interaction was great too, I like how you have captured their essence, well I can't wait to read the next chapter.