Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

:( i so wanted to see the end!

I feel like you need to work on your grammar. I was really excited to read this, but when I did, I found a lot of mistakes. The characters aren't really developed well. I mean, you're giving us a whole new take on what Percy's life could've been! We need to see what it was like, his background, where he comes from, and where he's going. I just felt like you tried to do too much, and it turned out less than perfect.

Sorry, but did you mean Deja vu. Great chapter, though.

Please update!

Update update plz

This has a lot of potential if you could clean up the grammar and punctuation.