guess daleks were never called Salt and Pepper Shakers. But i doubt that they know about the shakers.

That was so sad! Poor Mary Ann :(

This is ChocolateChipCookie28, this story's pretty good, but I have no idea who Tegan and Nyssa are. Are they from some other TV show or something?

That 911 thing was a good bit! Almost funny... you'd be surprised how many fan fictions I read where the writers don't do their homework on what was around when. Answering machines and 911 are biggies.

Poor Mary Ann... the circle is complete. She couldn't stop them, but she was there, at least. Just like Rose in "Father's Day." Makes me wish I was there when my mom died, even if it was only for a moment.

What comes next?

Ohhh... this is so sad! I knew Mary Ann wouldn't change history... it would be a whopper of a time ripple, but I hadn't thought she would be there in time to say goodbye to her mom. Great chapter.

Really looking forward to your next chapter and you handle the whole Mary Ann thing. Father's Day was such a great episode, but if I am counting right, The Doctor, wherever he is, has to go through at least four more lifetimes before you hid Eccleston (My Favorite) so I am really wondering how this will all work out!

I'm not good at reviewing every chapter, but I wanted to tell you I really like your story so far, and I hope it actually gets finished... I get tired of investing time starting to read a story that never gets completed.

I haven't seen as much Old Doctor Who as I did of the new series (Got kind of burned out on it after Tennant left and I hated River Song) but I have seen a couple on miscellaneous episodes with Nyssa and Tegan, so I can picture what your characters look like.

Keep up the good writing. Some people hate crossovers... I love them!

Great story, Tim. I wonder what adventures they'll have.