This story, I like it. Moar please.

Good chapter! I like the reaction's to Magmar's death. Sem rescuing Notch is pretty cool. Lisandra using Sem to power the weapons is very interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Nice work! This is a really interesting idea and the writing is nice. The Zoltan are great and I really liked Notch's coversation with them in Chapter 2. I'm interested in Notch's character development. His interaction with Lisandra is also very interesting.

You struggle with writing period. This is fucking garbage why the fuck do you bother?