I love the Gura Gura! There are never enough Gura stories! I honestly wish you did a Gura Gura Luffy story, and then just give Whitebeard the gravity fruit. These were a very entertaining read, the first and third chapter especially.

The Gura Gura no Mi is the ultimate Paramecia. Logias are overrated honestly except your original one.

Please, if you ever want to continue this one, let me tell you that it is pore gold!

Ok crush was good but way too short

Supernova was and is awesome ,Your other stories were average

Would love to see more of the first one

Hey primordial men your stories are amazing but the second one has the most potential in my opinion. Interesting crew members as well. Not to mention they seem knowledgeable about things earlier. It should be fun to make it into a real story. Then the first one after the time skip is my second favorite

Love the third one

Not interested in the second one

Like it a lot

Oh how i would love to seethe faces of the marines shit themself. i really hope you turn this into a story even if you did only marineford it would be amazing.

Honestly, all three stories made excellent full-blown ones but I really would like to read a Non-fruit OP Luffy from you too. Just like the first challange you've posted on first chapter.

I want more

Yo. I gotta see where this one would go. Along with the previous one.

I think this 2nd chapter has a lot of potential if you'd be willing to turn it into something bigger. It'd b fun to read, though from some of the things implied it might need to be rated M if you chose to include details. Still it'd be interesting.