It’s full of unexplained situations, relationships and powers. They would be warrantable IF you were to explain them later, but the sheer quantity of them and the fact there’re no doubt many more to come means any future explanations will just be suicide inducing. The fact that nothing interesting is actually happening on top of that leaves me with only one valid conclusion; the story is shit.

The concept is interesting and your writing in regards to grammar is good. But you handled it horribly.

Is there any chance that you will one day complete any of your stories?

I am rather liking this story, so was wondering if there will be an update to it any time soon?

Very entertaining! It is hard to find stories like this.

Needs updating 2 years is a bit much and this one looked like it was going to be awesome

hi will check it out on ao3 but what is hpffa site? good fic

LOVE this story so far please please keep up the good work and please keep on writing more of this story i would love to read more!

more sex plz!

Wotto da fukku?

Poor Lucius - he had his title pilfered (which is his son's fault) he had his WIFE pilfered (which is actually his OWN fault) and it's Harry that collected both (after pilfering his house-elf - which is also Lucius' fault). Is Lucius going to blow a gasket?

Great story so far

oh wow this is such a wonderful story. I really do hope that you continue it.

Please continue

Ok please continue this I'm liking how it's going

Isn't it nice and convenient when your adversaries aid and abet their own destruction? Lucius thought he was being shrewd in having the title tied to his estate - not him - while the actions of his SON cost him his title, his trophy wife, and could even cost him his life.