Reviews for ShadowFang: Start
Love2read23 chapter 5 . 4/22
Oooo this sounds like a great mystery! Is Emerald a human animagus who doesn't remember their old life? Is it Lily?! Thank you for writing.
starlite22 chapter 5 . 9/5/2019
Hope you continue, I was hoping there’d be kitten from emerald and Crookshanks, but now we know she’s his mum that’s just strange.
Kat chapter 5 . 3/27/2019
Please, You need to re-upload this chapter. The font's all wonky and unreadable.
alix33 chapter 1 . 3/28/2019
Emerald sounds far too intelligent to be just an ordinary cat with a very well developed BS meter/indicator, especially given her reactions to the History of Magic class and Quirrell but especially her very amusing reactions to Lockhart.
"addressed the teachers with a weary sigh", not "addressed the teachers with wearily sigh".
"hide a cat", not "hide a car".
"Emerald backed away", not "Emerald back away".
Fast Frank chapter 2 . 1/24/2019
Fun chapter.
Fast Frank chapter 1 . 1/24/2019
I would hope she would "dislike the smell of garlic", seeing how garlic can be fatal to cats.
Now, I'm almost hoping that someone does write a story where Myrtle follows Harry home.
HoneyBear84 chapter 4 . 1/26/2019
Love it as always and so looking forward to the next update
geetac chapter 4 . 1/25/2019
I am having problems reading this chapter.
HoneyBear84 chapter 3 . 1/23/2019
Love it so far and seriously hope u will start updating it again someday soon
Guest chapter 2 . 5/11/2016
just goofy.
carick of hunter moon chapter 11 . 5/11/2016
I like the idea, over all it is nice to see a story start and the mix and matching of ideas and caonon mostly works.
The use of an oc, Ember, she is fast closing into on been a Sue character.
I for one think the idea of Ember would have work a lot better using Hedwig.
You need to find a Beta to help you with your punctuation, sentence structure and paragraph separations post a story note asking if any one is will to help.
To help take a look at my profile there are some bit and bob that might be of use to you.
Good luck with your writting and the more you write the better your writting will become.
rec reading Robst. Harry Crow
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
I'm visually impaired and must read with a text to speech program.. It took about3 times longer than it should have to read this. Your punctuation, sentence structure and paragraph separations (or lack there of) play havoc with the program. While you may have a good story idea, I'll never know. Maybe that doesn't bother you. That's usually the case when a writer ignores ALL writing construction rules, but hay, they're there for a reason.
Netchka chapter 3 . 4/21/2016
I love the story. So different from other stories I've read.
lucasmartinsantiagoponga chapter 3 . 4/19/2016
Ember's apperance is a reference to Thalia Grace from Percy Jackson and the Olympians?
trynmailme chapter 3 . 4/19/2016
Thanks for the update... Plzzzzzz. Continue... Is Sirius arc happening next?