Reviews for the shorter story
Kmomof4 chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
That was absolutely lovely!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2016
Awwww this was so sweet and lovely. I loved how Emma knew that Killian was lonely and stayed with him even if she didn't admit her reason to anyone. Killian apologizing to Belle was fantastic. The ending was wonderful and satisfying. Thank you for this time to spend in s2 CS world.
Rose chapter 1 . 5/9/2016
Amazing
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
Well written. Proper teasing of the senses and taking time to bring them together without sacrificing Hook's roguishness.
ChamberlinofMusic chapter 1 . 4/24/2016
This was so sweet, thanks!
McCaptain chapter 1 . 4/22/2016
Loved this. This simple declaration/realization that a hook is lonely... That seriously hurt my heart. Thanks for ultimately making it better!
Melly326 chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
Loved this
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
Oh my goodness this is wonderful! And so very possible. What did Killian do when he was not with Emma? Did he have any companionship? The loneliness, his and hers, is so well written. And the aspect of her parents wanting to return to the EF, that was under consideration for a while. Leaving Emma with no place that felt like home, certainly not the EF but then what was Storybrooke?

The conclusion fit as Emma made a huge leap to be Hook's friend and to tell him how she felt. They each have someone they care about now. Thanks for writing.
emeraldarrows chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
This is so beautiful and perfect.
nolongerauser12 chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
you have no idea how much i love s2 cs I LOVE THEM I ADORE THEM I WANT TO MARRY THEM!
'She isn't going to think about how llama guy - or the guy that accidentally turned the other guy into the llama, if not the actual llama -' 'Yeah, you...pulled the lever, Kronk.'
i'm so speechless right now, THIS IS PERFECT. ('PULL THE LEVER, KRONK.')(And of course emma will joke about it because that's how she deals with this ish, i think her jokes are amazing but anyway.)

i was kind of freaking out over their conversation.(reminds me of my s2 self watching s2 cs moments, really wanting to them bang. oh the times, how they've changed. except wanting them to bang. but anyway.)

sheriff swan escorting a drunk/tipsy!hook is my aesthetic. and nice potc reference!(she would make a pop culture reference! she would! :D)

"Shouldn't you be too drunk to flirt?" Genius line. i love their banter! every line fills my heart with joy, they're too cute...he's lonely... awwww...

i love emma and david's conversation. emma's observations and dialogue is so funny! the bit about apple orchards and windows 95 killed me. those computers do look old though, perhaps it is windows 95? haha charming questioning emma about hook(we all know you love him, david nolan you are not fooling anybody.)

i think charming and snow could see it from the beginning! i remember s2 and s3, snow caught the looks emma and killian were giving each other and david asked emma about hook when she didn't mean neal at the diner. hmmmm.

'eyeliner wearing, earring possessing, swaggering swashbuckler. Kronk's description, not hers.' i think you just came up with killian's twitter bio with that first sentence.
HE'S ALWAY A GENTLEMAN!
whenever there was a s2 /3 line reference to future seasons, i squealed, i love it when canon lines are used in canon divergence.

thank you emma for standing up for belle! awww milah mention. *cries forever* it is hanging out, emma! (that stage in a cs fic when all you want to sing is 'GIRL YOU'RE IN DENIALLLL.') hook would be great at tying shoelaces obviously, hook buying a black leather jacket :D and i love how emma hints where and what time she'll be at the supply store and knows how much he loves his new black leather jacket.

INGRID!(All she wants to do is talk to emma, i'm in pain.)

oh my goodness, i was tweeting the other day about killian eating ice cream! *high five* he's warming up to the frozen cream WHAT A DORK. of course he'll stay in the land he doesn't know for her, this land without magic, because the magic is her, he will stay for her.

very cute that henry loves to write! Ooooh mama snow knows what's up! thank goodness cora is not affecting snow. emma going to killian for comfort is so natural and is everything. ...is he really giving her massage? dear God.

i just want to give emma a hug , reading about all her problems. she always wants to look out for everybody and keep them happy even when it frustrates her. And she doesn't think she's allowed to be frustrated! one of the reasons why i love emma and killian's relationship so much is because of how supportive and loving it is. they're so good for each other, they make each other feel human and normal yet all of sorts of spectacular because he reminds her that it's okay to be frustrated and he always encourages her. it makes my heart melt. you showed that beautifully.

their banter and the 'you couldn't handle it' killed me. THE KISS KILLED ME. THEY'RE NOT ALONE ANYMORE THEY HAVE EACH OTHER.

i'm sorry for yelling, this was just beyond amazing.
Somethingalltogether chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
Lovely and well written
Nouqueret chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
Lovely story!
FangirlingCaptain chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
That is definitely one of the best canon divergence I have read. I love their interactions together and Emma's denial turning into something that is pretty much inevitable.
randomsquare chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
Goddamn, you always blow me away. Now brimming with Season 2 feels. Well done. Eek, I'm late for an appointment now. It was probably worth it.
Mrs. Hook- Jones-O'Donoghue chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
i loved this. it was great!
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