In the A/N you said you know how run like shiemi but in Naruto, Naruto like someone else but he ends up with another person so it could end up Rin and Izumo we don’t know yet.

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I'd say continue but I fear you've abandoned this already. Your writing is rough around the edges but really good at describing internal emotions. Not so good with objects or actions. Dialogue is good.

The writing is bad at times when describing objects or actions. But I do like the internal 'monologue' you could say when you describe the feelings and all. I'd say continue but I'm afraid you already abandoned this.

this is good liking how you keep the characters themselves cant wait to see how things progress

Salut ! bon je suis française et je ne suis pas sur que tu arrivera a me comprendre mais bon (personnellement je lis ta fic grâce à google traduction). Merci à toi de faire une fanfiction sur Izumo/Rin c'est un pairing que j'adore ! J'espère vraiment que tu continuera car il y a rien de plus triste que voir une fic être abondonner :(. Bonne chance à toi, je suis de tout cœur avec toi !

Keep it up.

Keep it up it goood.

Pllllllllleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeee update rinzumo 4 lifu.
Nice story l. great potential.

yaaaas Rin/Izumo! there needs to be more because there is way to little and i feel like they would be great together i also really like the idea of rin being more feral. because he is a demonic teen!