This story is so good! Please keep going if you can!

Oh boy...You just turned up the HEAT!

No problem! This chapter was just as great, and I’m excited your back! I’m also in love with this story! I’m just curious though, as to what the ‘side pairings’ are?

Please update soon... This is a rare gem of a FT fanfic which I really don't wanna see left in dust like some others...
Finally, ignore all those morons who keep on screaming about what they wanna see.
Only you can decide what happens in the story and so far it's going strong. Keep up the good work!

Stayed from 11:00pm to 3:18am to read this whole thing! I don’t regret a thing

Yesss girl! This story is awesome!

Levy...she's not dead is she? Woah that was some pretty wild thing to do. Shit how the hell did Gajeel know about her? My gosh that was a shocker... Best not to assume anything. Good chapter, bit of a wake call for us readers. Sorry for any abuse you received I hope you will still power through with this story cause I think it's an excellent read.

Yay a badass Juvia...love it!

Ok we will hold you to your promise.

Damnit noooo...ooo! Why? Why? So getting into it. Gee would have been nice to see those two face off. Ahh Natsu was seriously cool in this chapter, glad he made Juvia snap out of her misery or whatnot and made her have fun. He's so thoughtful reminds me of
Avatar arc when he told Erza that their reasons for keeping Gray's whereabouts from Juvia was messed up. Believe me I hated Gray and Erza for that and wished Juvia slapped Gray herself. Good interaction with Natsu and Juvia, it can't always be about Gray perhaps some interaction with Loke too. But first I am really excited for our muso iron man entering the scene..again. You just can't have one phantom lord character without the other. Good chapter.

This is the first time I've hated Levy

Not to be rude or anything.. but is this a Nalu or Nali story? Cause there is almost no romance between Natsu and Lucy and he keeps chasing after Lisanna, even after he said he's going to get over her. So just wondering. Since I'm not really a Nali fan. I don't have a problem with the ship, but I'd rather not read it.

Anyway, I'm so worried about Juvia. I hope nothing goes wrong when she's out with the rest of the gang.

Okay, I wanted to start off by saying that I made a review earlier on saying that I enjoyed your story so far, and I have, but I had a few things that I was wondering about: Where exactly are you going with this story at the moment? It’s not clear anymore, the ideas in the story are not adding up to me. Like, for instance, you said this is a Nalu story, and yet, as I was reading over the previous chapters, it seems as though you try to put Lisanna in everyone’s life. Somehow, she’s always there instead of Lucy, and at this point I just felt the need to ask because I can’t keep reading. I keep thinking “Is this a Nalu or a Nali story? Explain how it is Nalu, please. With Natsu, it’s as if he’s willing to try and get over Lisanna, but it seems that he’s so smitten with her that if she shows even the slightest interest, his feelings will rekindle.

I’m not trying to put a damper on this story, I just felt that there are a lot of potholes. In the beginning, there was a storyline. There was action. There was adventure. There was even a little romance between Natsu and Lucy, but then they got back to school, and the main girl you wrote about was Lisanna. It’s discouraging to the fans of this story who have read as far as I have. I have read a lot of the other reviews and decided that no one really any explanation as to why the story seemed to be Nali. I wanted to do that. So, if you didn’t mind, could you explain where this story is headed? Are there any real plots? Also, for the last few chapters, there has a been a constant disappearance of Lucy. A few of the reviews spoke of this as well. It seemed as though you focus more on the other characters than your “supposed” top two, Natsu and Lucy.

I do love how you developed her character, though. I’ve read many fanfics putting Lucy as an Angel, but they neglected the fact that since she is new to Earth, she is ignorant to a lot of the ways things are done. You captured that nicely. I would recommend an official author’s note explaining these regards. It would help to truly understand; if you left Lucy out on purpose, if this story is indeed a Nalu FanFiction, or if there is a plot. It would be greatly appreciated.

Yeah couldn't you just skip the filler or fast forward it a bit.

Poor Natsu