Yea! I was so happy when I saw this. It literally was exactly what I was talking about. Just them together talking about something other then business or potential danger. I loved it, and thanks for taking the time to write it.

Great first date - even with the restrictions Jade's injuries put on them. But letting the love build up before they have sex can be a great, solid base for their future.

Nice little dinner date. Things are starting well for our favorite couple. With Trina's and the others' assistance, their careers will grow and their relationship will, hopefully, grow more as they grow closer and Jade is able to let her guard down for Tori and not worry about being used.

My scaly heart beats with pride for my favorite mortal psychopath. Masterful work, Scotty.

Awesome bonus chapter, wonderful fluff.

Jade sure surprised me, guess her vulnerability when it comes to Tori came to her advantage since it made Tori love her even more, giving Jade a confidence boost and more!

On a final note, I was laughing when Tori revealed she had pics and videos of Jade's boobs and ass, kinda horny indeed when she couldn't get the real deal.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Excellent work. Festus. The traitor. Beck and Robbie as masterminds of a counterplot. Jade having a look a like cousin. The last chapters have done the tale a great service.

Nice way to end it, if this is the end and there isn't an epiloge.

I can see Tori and Jade after the wedding, Tori making out with Jade on the way home, and Jade jokingly saying 'I thought the bride got lucky on her wedding night, not the guests', just for Tori to counter with 'Just wait until our wedding night'.

Have to admit, I didn't expect Nevel to be in here. I should've, with how he was in 'iCarly' and his brief appearance in 'Sam & Cat', but because of that, I didn't. Which means I should've, since him not being there was more expected as a surprise.

I just confused myself typing that.

I was really disappointed with how the story ended. I was waiting for Jori the entire story only to get maybe three chapters of flimsy she loves me, she loves me not, I love her but we can't be together yet. And half a chapter of them actually together. I mean there was way more Bori in this story then anything. As someone who loves Jori I was glad there was a happy ending but I was still majorly disappointed and kind of felt like I wasted a lot of time following this story.

not fan of the end actually it suck big time festus was a terrible bad guy and beck getting everything he wanted just over the top was good but this destroy every little bit decent left.

"Back in Los Angeles, Jade was wondering "what kind of person let their parents know they're involved, then just heads out and leaves that new relationship alone with their parents?"

This very first paragraph was really funny to me because I am not sure if you know about it already or not, but I was listening to an interview with Liz Gilles talking about her new show Sex&Drugs&Rock&Roll. (This was over a year ago) She said she got this new boyfriend and her parents came to visit. Apparently when her parents got there the people from the show called her. I think it was for a last minute call back audition, but she had to leave right then. She left leaving her new boyfriend of like 3 weeks alone with her parents in her apartment lol. That's why it was funny to me that you had Tori in this story doing pretty much the same thing.

Exciting action sequence. And good windup of that whole subplot. Tori & Trina were both pretty direct when they wanted to be. Very cool. It worked especially well for Trina since she was always direct and to the point - just this time it was for herself for a change.

So is one of the new bodyguards a lot neater than the other?

Wait, so this is the end of story? Did I got it right?
If it is - this was a gret journey, great story, thank you :).
Great wrap up of everything.
Thanks again :)

Excellent end to this wonderful story. Really awesome work.

2 things 1, I hate. That it's over and 2, when will the sequel start because come on you can't leave this universe just yet. We need to meet Trina's kid and to see Jade and Tori get married and have kids. And launch their new carrier's. Here's hoping it starts soon.