Wow. Life really wasn't good to you was it? I'm glad to hear that you are still alive at least... update at your own pace (which is what i do... long waits between chapters because of so many ideas for new stories and video games...yeah)
Looking forward to whenever the next chapter drops!

That is so sad to hear. I really hope both you, your family and your friend get some awesome news soon :3
And if everything is too much to handle, and need someone to talk to, I'm always here to listen X3
Hope to hear from you again soon ;3

hahaha love that ending to CH 2. can't wait for Zorro's reaction to Mihawk cough luffys dad cough. update soon please

This is fun, the dad identity will about break Zoro

I have read A Hawk's freedom too! I must say though, I think you have both of their personalities down.

omg! I can't wait for the reaction when it turn out who's luffy's dad really is? are you going to reveal it when they get to baratie? XD XD XD XD

Oi! XD Hahahaha! This story is interesting! When will Zoro finds out that Luffy's 'dad' is Mihawk? I can't wait for that. Though I couldn't help but to snicker when Luffy mentioned that his dad is a pretty important guy, I mean, sure he was mentioning Mihawk!Harry but... hahahaha Monkey D. Dragon everyone? The most wanted man? THAT'S important hahahaha. I would have thought that Luffy is mentioning his real dad if it wasn't for the fact that this is about Mihawk!Harry.

Anyways, I'll say, this story is good so please continue and update soon :)

Oh poor poor Zoro.

Can't wait to see what zoro will think he when finds out who luffy dad is

That was cute. I really enjoyed that and it's like a breath of fresh air. I hope your rl settles down and balances for you as well. I wish you the best.
~Death