Reviews for Vali DxD
wolfpackrwby88 chapter 44 . 5/16
If asia is vali's bishop, why is she fighting in rias's match?
dkainallen chapter 1 . 4/21
koneko in harem
Chyllen chapter 1 . 3/21
It's so bad so so bad
Anon66 chapter 5 . 1/11
Bro your story writing sucks balls
Chyllen chapter 3 . 9/22/2019
I just don't get how everyone says this crap is good example...
I woke up with a naked girl in bed my mom opens the door freeks out I'm walking to school ..end
It's not that bad but it's damn close
put more effort in your writing
Chyllen chapter 2 . 9/11/2019
All I got to say is it's like reading a a bad middle school play
deltanz chapter 49 . 5/10/2019
Great story. Honestly hadn’t realized the mistakes, won’t say what for spoilers, but it was good
ReaperOfOaths chapter 1 . 10/12/2018
I feel like I'm having a stroke while reading your summary. Jesus christ, sort that shit out!
Misaka Phenex chapter 3 . 10/11/2018
rias is a butch
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 48 . 9/11/2018
Well, that fight went well, Asia got her anger worked out on Diodara and the Arc has ended. It was a nice chapter and quality wise was a lot better than your last. It was fun to read how the Hunter got his ass handed to him. It was something way overdue if you ask me. That all asides, it was a fun and entertaining ride from start till end and while not great, it still was a good story.

And I am at the end of the reviews on this chapter. The new version is going to be as good as this one or even better. I'll see you on chapter 3 and I'll hope I won't miss the updates.
Saluut.
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 47 . 9/11/2018
A little bit anticlimactic and it read too soon. I didn't feel anything when I raze this which is sad because boredom isn't a fun feelings when you read something and if you can't feel something. As for the plot twists you got here, I could see them coming from far away. So sad to say but this wasn't great and I know you can do better.
Saluut.
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 46 . 9/6/2018
Interesting take and a whole lot better than your last chapter. Also, very different from your other fic. With Seekvaira, I hope we will see more of her soon. With Sona, what else could you expect to happen?
She has to rely on her brain and I guess that Saji is going to Play a bigger role in the marking when you cut to the rewrite.
As for Kiyome, I hope we can read that thing. It's fun to see that sort of thing. Teasing was good, pacing was nice, it looks like things are finally kicking off. This is going to be a lot of fun so long it lasts.
Saluut.
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 45 . 9/6/2018
Okay, this was better than your last coverage and I was somewhat happy to see that in this fic. I just hope you can make up for that. The lemon was good enough and I like the new stuff you got worked out in here. This was an interesting read and I think there's some interesting stuff going on. I just hope we will see it all worked out.
Saluut.
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 44 . 9/4/2018
Well, a psycho on their track who got pervs labeled as saints plus an Angel now making moves on a Dragon. And there has got to be a loophole worked out to make sure that someone is going to rock someone's world and I don't have to tell you who those persons are.

I wonder if Ajuka is really that stupid that he can't see that his little brother got lots and lots of stupid things worked out that will turn out really bad for everyone involved in here. This is going to be fun.
Saluut.
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 43 . 9/4/2018
Indeed, a bit anticlimactic but nothing to standards that I haven't seen this summer and I'm somewhat lucky that things haven't affected me to a serious degree. I did like the smack down and hey, I did not look for more so anyone making a complain about it should shut up.

There was a lot of other stuff like Megumi's death and the events that were on the minds of a lot of persons. Issei is going to be busy the coming days given the mess he is now cleaning up. And it looks like there are going to be a few more harms tickets to be printed out so far.
Saluut.
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