| Reviews for Deep Within |
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Purplestan chapter 1 . 4/17/2017 You have some grammar problems in this you write some word in past tense and some in present tense so it doesn't actually make any sense. |
atomiczla chapter 7 . 5/14/2016 this is good, really good, I hope to read a new chapter soon |
jul312 chapter 5 . 4/24/2016 You're a great writer! Please continue :) |
ihascupquake chapter 3 . 4/17/2016 AWESOME! |