Could feel the heat radiating off my phone. Puhh. Really well written.

Noooooo! You can't stop at that point! This scene is amazing, so well written. Please continue!

Haha that was more than just good!

Wow, so hot! It makes me wish this really happened. Well written!

Holy Crap, this was amazing! And not just because it was Malec, but the writing was superb! It was so descriptive and real. Great job, I definitely want to read more from you!

This is so good :) I'm actually working on my own version of this bit because I thought that they couldn't possibly have been 'checking the perimeters' either. Great job :)

I like this short story! ;)

Wow, great story! This was a very nice interpretation of what might have happened in this episode. Love Male Your wrote them and this story really well; I was drawn into it from the start. Great job, I loved it!