bonne fic!

Ickle firstie Fem!HP is a BAMF! Fun action scene!

I don't think the lyrics you used for Xion theme is the Official ones as I just can't find a song that sings them only the other one but good story so far. (I've had that problem with a number of songs in this story but then again I think most of them may not have a true official song in English.)

Awesome!

Higurashi no Naku Koro Ni: Dear You, is evidently a love song for a horror Visual Novel called with the same name of Higurashi no Naku Koro Ni.

AAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaand Im done. Wow, manga in a Harry Potter. That declares is officially a crack fic.

This meta/fourth wall breaking shit is getting out of hand. And they play it off too, I remember the rule about the world ducking order, but I guess your hoarding a ton of liberties with your story. If I knew this would be a crack fic, I would have accepted it, but I came in thinking this was a serious take on the Harry Potter universe with kingdom hearts. All of these references aren’t necessary and not really needed. And it just make plot holes in this story. I like the focus of the story of xion being a princess of nobodies, and you should have put an indication that Harry is a female in this ALTERNATE UNIVERsE! That should have been in the description or in the first chapter.

damn, didn't mean to hit submit. but yeah, this actually straightened out some confusion I had with the original story. haha. and it was truly awesome. thanks for sharing.

This was great. I kept putting off reading it, since the kingdom hearts storylines are as confusing as stories told by a 5 year old high on laughing gas from the dentist

Please Make the sequel

Been a while since I've read this. Only worlds I can think of off the top of my head are Star Wars (I'm a fan of Ahsoka) and Rising of the Shield Hero.

For the latter, I think it would actually be neat if being a Keybearer, or "Guardian Blade" actually had the same level of growth correction as bearing one of the Legendary Holy Weapons. For that one, you could have it that they receive the boosted stats while on the world, lose it while off, and if they manage to get a keyblade from the world (modeled, of course, after the LHWs), they can retain the boosted stats off world.

How about sending them to help Ichigo in the world of bleach due to the potter family being connected to the Peverell family. I think being given a mission from death himself would be a great excuse for that. Plus having them learn how to use spiritual energy would be very useful against xehanort.

So did they just kind off drop blaise or what. Wasnt her her friend to?

Wait... Fate/Stay Night? Does this mean Xion is going to be meeting Blackwing?

Since when is thirteen the drinking age on Earth? I mean I hear in France you can get away with it that young, but there are valid reasons for that that have nothing to do with social mores and everything to do with health hazards in the tap water.