Good story - liked the team friendship and realizing they took Eliot for granted and trying to make it right in the end.

Love this.

I agree that Elliot doesn't get enough screen time. I really liked your story :-)

Very cute! I liked this.

I really enjoyed it. Startd out intense and then turned sad. Poor Eliot didn't go to his and missed going with the. At least Sophie is making it up to him.

Aww! Loved this. So sweet and love the team searching so hard for Eliot. Characters are spot on. Well done as always.

Eliot the lonely loner. Loved it.

I really liked this story.

Haha! "Cause my nana taught me all about self-preservation." Perfect characterization there! Love this story. It always bothered me that poor Eliot was left out at the end. With no one checking on him. I love the way you stay true to Eliot's character. Uncomfortable with the team taking care of him, believing he isn't worth their love. Such a beautiful, tortured character. Great work!

Really enjoyed this, but it doesn' t feel complete. Maybe one more chapter?

Lee

This is a great story! I loved it!

Loved this. Just plain loved it.

Oh, this is great! Very suspenseful. Characters are spot on. Eagerly jumping to next chapter!

(ﾉヮ)ﾉ*:･ﾟ another El Whumpage that you and me share a liking for:) thanks for the gift!