Uh, you put the same content twice in the same chapter.

Even though Mario and Peach are a couple, it seems like Peach has a tiny crush on Rosalina. Then again, everyone probably has a crush on her if we're being honest...

you did the story twice here.

What does the letter say? I can't read japanese

This is really interesting!

I wish this was during the Mario Odyssey/Smash Ultimate era just to see Daisy's reaction to her invite to Smash Ultimate. I imagine that Daisy not getting into Brawl is going to be the start of her becoming bitter and tired of being in Peach's shadow.
I've played almost every Smash game accept 64. Smash 4 is good but Ultimate beats it in every way accept for the Online. Waluigi makes more sense to be in Smash these days since Daisy is mostly known for being in the Sports and Party games.

I love your story it's great how your putting daisy in the spotlight she honestly doesn't get much love nowadays and yes I would LOVE a sonic forces fanfic that would be fantastic ;) 3. Keep up the great work it's amazing. :)))

Yo, the Shadow Queen is in this story!? She's my favorite Paper Mario villain ever. I'm really excited to see what she'll be doing in this. However I'm not a fan of the style of dialogue she's given. It's difficult to read. Especially for me since I'm visually impaired and my text to speech program reads her dialogue in single letters. Just have her speak normally.
I'm kinda confused where Bowser being in the Palace of Shadow. Was this before or after the race where Daisy and Birdo had the accident?

Nice. but I wonder who Princess Blake is.

Please update this soon!

I liked this!

Yeah, Daisy really doesn’t get enough credit.

I loved it! It was amazing. A few grammar mistakes but other than that it was really well done. Keep on writing! You have very good potential! Ciao! ;D yay

Since this does take place after Galaxy 1, is there going to be a 10 year arc where Daisy gets more and more Envious of her friends until there's a breaking point?. Then she gets confirmed to be in Smash Ultimate as a echo fighter of Peach. ...I forgot if you brought up Smash Bros in this story or not.

It was a nice chapter