Thank you very much for that bit if yaoi awesomness. I only have one critique: sentence structure is important to the flow of a paragraph and quite a few times your paragraphs get a bit choppy. Very slight re-wording in most cases would make it flow smoothly. Other than that you have a well written piece here. Great job.

Reno don't know what's coming. Cloudy, Seph and Vinny gonna do him in! Thanks for the excitement and continue to write for us please.

Oh my, THAT WAS HOOOOT! PLEASE, OH PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE FOR ME! Forget about everyone else. I love you! I feel so tingly all over. Thanks for the read.

Just awesome!