Are Astoria and Ginny going to end up together? Because if so, I ship it.

love it and great job !

This is a well-written one-shot. My favourite part is the beginning where Scorpius intervenes and forces the bully, Dylan to all the other kids. I like how you've not directly jumped into Draco and Harry's friendship suddenly but made the process seem tentative for both of them. I like the subtlety and the barely-there undertones of regret emanating from both of them. An excellent job!

[SpaG: "... Dylan had set him off again—on her own, as well as pacify Dylan and his mother..." Here her should be his]

I just had to read more yours stories to sleep happy (will be 3 am soon!). I found this particularly pleasant and seemed to the first I read. This story was charming and cute.
I loved!

You go girl! Also, I agree with everything. I don't have anything against Dramione, I actually used to sometimes enjoy the banter been them, but it just doesn't match Drarry. I'm going to do done to, maybe. Drarry fans, Write On!

Bravo Captain!

You did well in writing a post-Hogwarts Draco. There was a good mix of the person he had been and the person he was trying to be. And Harry's nervousness at wanting to be friends was just so...Harry.

I would have liked to seen more of the build of their friendship over the 6 years, though I know that can be tricky with a word count limit. Also, in the beginning when Scorpius said his mum was sick and he had to nurse her back to health, the first thing I thought was that she was gravely ill and on her death bed.

:D
3 Your Seeker

It's cute.

Really liked this! Thanks for writing it.

I love it! You said it was Drarry... do you mean it as a Drarry friendship for this fanfic?