Reviews for A Second Chance Part 1 - A New Life
DragonClanMaster chapter 9 . 3/21/2018
I, honestly liked this story more than I thought I would. Considering that, well, I HATE the Harry Potter Chronicles. It was good enough that Imma head off to read your sequel.
Guest chapter 7 . 3/16/2018
Luna needs a crumble-horned snorkack or something else that's strange and would make sense for someone with visions to have
Carol542 chapter 1 . 1/20/2018
love it
Sliver Crystal of Tokyo-Moon chapter 9 . 8/20/2017
It's too fascinating story. Harry Potter reincarnated as Raidon Sawada, took over of the sky pacificer.

It's fun to read it.
Xyori Nadeshiko chapter 9 . 1/6/2017
Ehhhh Kyouya es de Harry? Jo entonces quien sera de Tsu-kun?
Uh chapter 7 . 11/29/2016
idk if you know this, but Sayuri refers to orange lilies, and in Japan they symbolize hatred and revenge. o.o
Amu4ever chapter 7 . 11/17/2016
I just realised...what happened to Verde? You only said that Harry didn't know what to do with him, because he was mostly interested in magic. So, did he go? Or did he stay but not harmonise? Or...?
Amu4ever chapter 6 . 11/17/2016
Why do I have the feeling that Hibari will be his Cloud? -sigh- Huh, but tehen again...Tsuna needs Guardians too...hm.

Also, it is sad that he couldn't harmonise with Colonello. He is one of my top favourite characters!
Amu4ever chapter 5 . 11/17/2016
Oh...so, Harry can have more than one Guardian per Element. I see :)
Amu4ever chapter 4 . 11/17/2016
Why wouldn't Nono question how Salazar got the information? Why wouldn't he wonder about how Nanas supposedly flame-oblivious neighbour knew about Dying will flames? Why wouldn't he ask how Sal knew what he wanted to do with the twins? Why would he listen to a suddenly very not-flame-oblivious neighbour about how to treat his grandchildren? Why wouldn't he question the in-depth knowledge of flame sealing? Why wouldn't he question Sals motives to stop him?

Why didn't he do any of these things?

Thank you for sharing your story with us!
Amu4ever chapter 3 . 11/17/2016
Oh my gosh...this is...this is...BRILLANT! I didn't see that coming AT ALL! Wow! That was a masterly planned out plot twist. It is so, SO, rare for someone to be able to make plot twists truly surprising, but this was on a whole level.

Oh-my-gosh-thank-you-THANK-YOU-for-sharing! Thanks so much!

It is such an honour to be allowed to read the story of someone who is so talented!

I am so happy now. You brightened my day considerable and made me smile :)
Amu4ever chapter 2 . 11/17/2016
Huh...you have made her a Sun. Well, I guess that fits in a way...hmmm...

Thank you for sharing this with us :)
Amu4ever chapter 1 . 11/17/2016
Where exactly is the difference between option two and three? Death would train Harry anyway with option two and option three would lead to him decideing again between the remaining two option. So, what is the point of it even existing?
Kikuriki chapter 7 . 10/27/2016
You should make flash backs bold instead of itallic, since itallics are already used for a different language..
magicanimegurl chapter 8 . 10/25/2016
I like what you have so far and all the main characters. Cant wait to read more. Write on!
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