Reviews for The Serpent's Gaze
UnlikelyPresence chapter 82 . 6/29
OH MY GOD DID DRACO JUST SWAT RITA SKEETER AAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA PLEASE TELL ME HE DID
UnlikelyPresence chapter 69 . 6/29
HARRY'S AN IDIOTTTTTTTTTTT aren't the escaped Death Eaters at Gringotts?
RoseLissaBelikova chapter 1 . 4/14
Loved this - I love Harry & Snape slowly getting closer. Hoping you'll update soon!
Guest chapter 12 . 2/29
"It's what we want more than anything, isn't it? What we want, like, before we even think of wanting anything else, what we want in our- in our souls? In our-" Harry's gaze flickers over the inscription again. "I show not your face," he says softly. "But your heart's desire."

I have always - always - loved the Mirror of Erised portion of the Sorcerer's Stone; it breaks my heart, and that nostalgia for something that we know and feel but can't wholly be experienced again hits me harder as I grow older. I've read many a wonderful adaptation of the Erised chapter in some truly brilliant fanfiction, but yours, I believe, is the best of them all. You capture the desire that we have for some things that's so deep that it runs in our bones. Harry's realization of what the mirror truly is is a work of art in your story. Truly, beautifully, and masterfully done.

PS sorry for a super sappy review, but I just had to say it. Thank you for writing this!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/7
Reading your work has taught me so much about HOW to write, especially in present tense. You have an incisive style as well that I really enjoy. Thank you!
Guest23 chapter 125 . 12/13/2019
Oh my. Just went right through this. Why doesn't this have a million reviews?

Love your Slytherin Harry. Everything about this world you've made is so natural, so easy, that I could be tricked into thinking this is the truth, and that this is cannon all along.

You have such a gift! I really hope that you update soon, and that all is well.
the-fabulous-Jai chapter 104 . 6/10/2019
i love Angsty Teen Bi Disaster Harry and i will protect him with my life
AurorQuill17 chapter 125 . 6/4/2019
I just binged this and completely adore both plot and your versions of the characters. You’re so good at this!
CRoseSing chapter 125 . 5/24/2019
Oh man, 125 chapters looked like so many when I started, but now I’m sad to have caught up to your writing. This is so engaging, getting darker for everyone, but also with a little bit of a hope for Harry to have a connection with Snape. He has pulled away from everyone it seems, and barely even talks to Hermione anymore. It seems lonely.

The wit between Snape and Harry made me actually chuckle out loud a few times. This is such amazing writing!
Valen Goncalvez chapter 125 . 5/1/2019
I... Physically can't WAIT for the next chapter!
Vivacia18 chapter 109 . 4/29/2019
The irony of your chapter titles (since I tend to only take note of them at the bottom of the page rather than the top) never fail to amuse me. Really fits with Harry's sass, I must say XD
Vivacia18 chapter 103 . 4/29/2019
Oh Lucius...
Vivacia18 chapter 98 . 4/29/2019
Phew, I was honestly worried he was going to get outed in the cave, glad he made it back to share the intel in one piece ;
Vivacia18 chapter 96 . 4/29/2019
3 3 3
Vivacia18 chapter 95 . 4/29/2019
Pfft, oh I really do enjoy Cedric and Fleur here XD

Poor Blaise, I'm sorry buddy, but it seems Harry's finally realized he's not cut out for purely physical relationships, especially not when he has to hide them, and have a "real" one as a front to boot. Hope he doesn't take it too hard, futile though that hope may be...
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