nuuuuuu! A #cliffhanger! *dies a little more inside
*sobs uncontrollably

That was awesome and the sex part was so hot

Yes, very good, I loved this story

don t worry I thought it was pretty Benlos anyxay That was goid :D Thank you for fis :

This has been an amazing fic, I loved every second of this. Hope you can make a fic as good as this or make a sequel for this!
#DatEndingDoe

This was a great story.
Loved every second of it!

I m curious about how Chad get out too... Seeing as neither of his parents have magical powers. Help from Villains then ? I love the friendship between VK. Thank you for this

This is really cute ! i really like how you wrote Audrey and you made her nice and friend with Carlos.

Yay, a new BenLos fanfic! I've been waiting forever for someone to continue the BenLos legacy! This seems like it'll be a good one, even though there's only like 3 chapters out, I hope you won't stop making this, altho chapter 2 was a bit short compared to the rest.

Hypocrite I say! some grammar errors here and there, and some over there. i like how ben had broken up with audrey within the first chapter, which means this will focus more on BenLos instead of having to wait until chapter 5 to see benlos finally happening, good job and keep making this!

the start was a little bit rough, i do like how the cliffhanger just ends right there. for all we know ben could be breaking up with audrey, or wanting to propose to her secretly? idk but keep em' comin!

cliff hangers, oh why do you exist. On a serious note, good job on this, continue your work!

Nice job for your first chapter, some grammar errors here and there, a tad bit short and maybe reduce the POV switching a little bit, but this actually pretty decent. Keep makin' them Oh and I'm guessing, as it is a bit obvious, that Ben is breaking up with Audrey?

I love what's going on here so far, altho I would like you to continue and improve your writing at the same time. Haven't seen a BenLos fic for some time now. Keep up the good work.