I really enjoyed the Blake and Yang moments alot and I can tell that it's probably going to be the main focus of the story but I would love to see how the others are dealing with what's happened to Yang.

I mean I would love just for Ruby or Taiyang to just break down and just show how this is really affecting them.

But your story do whatever you want.

really like the story's atmosphere XD

Very good job. Started mispelling things near the end of the chapter, but that's fine. See if you can get them to come out faster too plz! Thank you! :)

Please continue all you can be I really think that's my favorite of all your stories

I once read another amnesia!Yang story and was sad that the writer didnt finish it. i hope you will finish yours as it is a very interesting premise.

That's pretty sucks.. i mean like imagine your partner having an amnesia and doesn't remember anything at all about our precious time together? 100% sad :(
nice chapter btw and pls stay strong Blake and Yang :'(

Another great chapter, I liked how you did this one from Blake's POV. I know you probably going to focus on just Blake and Yang for this, but it'd be cool to have a chapter from Ruby's POV about what's going on with Yang. Anyway, it's just a thought, keep up the good work.

So far so good. I would like to see this go farther in the fact that Yang has moments where she feels things yet can not remember them specifically. A few amnesia victims who never recover their memories actually report those feelings. Also a way to get through that wall a person would have to suffer from a similar ordeal to the letter before they can remember anything.

sweet and touching. keep up the good work!

The new chapter is sooooooooooo sweet !

It logged me out so i'm just gonna post this as a guest. Very good story it looks like, I want to see more!

not bad. good imagery just a few grammar and spelling issues

So, Yang amnesia fic, with so many Ruby amnesia stories out there it's nice to see someone change it up. First chapter was great, even if the end was a little sad.
It's not a big issue, but there's something that I wanted to point out. You give Yang her own room, the show made it to look like Ruby and Yang shared a room together, considering Ruby woke up in what is assumed to be her room and it had a second bed with a yellow color scheme. I'm assuming why Yang was staying in a separate room (perhaps Tai's room) was because in her depression she wanted to be by herself.
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.