| Reviews for Deal With The Devil |
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   Aelain chapter 17 . 5/27 So well written, enjoyable OC, No power wank, and uh...stopped updating. Figures lol. Hope you come back to this excellent bit of fanfiction some time. |
| ME chapter 17 . 5/14 All right, this is really good. I hope you haven’t abandoned this story (although with real life a thing, I won’t blame you if you have), and I can’t wait to see what’s in store for Shiori in the future. |
| bisexuwhale chapter 17 . 8/16/2019 THIS IS SOOOOOO GOOOOOD~ Keep up the awesome work! |
| garden rain chapter 3 . 8/12/2019 i feel its a shame that u killed off the parents so erly to yeet her to shikamaru but this storys rly interesting and the relationships r developing nicely! i support u and keep writing happily |
| Jinx chapter 17 . 7/31/2019 Great chapter! Love the sibling dynamic between Shiori n Shika! Very wholesome! I’m glad n worried about the little cheat Shiori discovered. While the conclusion of reincarnation is unlikely, the more probable conclusion of spy n resulting mind walk is something I’d worry about too. But dear Writer God please I hope she isn’t frying her brain! |
| Gothic Rain chapter 2 . 4/8/2019 Why would a Nara end up in the orphanage though? I doubt the clan would allow that - Donza child recruiting and clan secrets and all. |
| glhekmgvog chapter 17 . 4/4/2019 Please pick this up again, this is bloody fantastic! It really captures the essence of the darker parts of the naruto world while still keeping it good. That's so rare in alot of writing, you're balancing between the good parts and the bad. Its masterful |
| HappyDog23006007341647 chapter 17 . 2/18/2019 Nice, I’m looking forward to see where u decide to take this story. Oooooh I can’t wait when she starts doing more advanced stuff like Fūinjutsu, medical ninjutsu, and summoning jutsu! I hope she’s a boss in the academy! That’s for writing, and I await your return! -Dog |
| Guest chapter 17 . 11/9/2018 Update! |
| homelybiscuit chapter 17 . 9/28/2018 Love this story so far! I can't wait to see her reaction if they ever mention considering an engagement to Itachi lol. Hope to read more soon! |
| Guest chapter 17 . 9/3/2018 This is so gooooddddd Please update sokn |
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/25/2018 You called both chakras yang, and the blue one is mental yin with the red one being physical yang. |
| Reader chapter 17 . 8/15/2018 I hope her brain-chakra trick doesn't have bad consenquences. (Please update soon! Thanks for writing.) |
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/12/2018 Literally they are so so adorable |
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/12/2018 I love the way Shikaku is handling this |
