| Reviews for Private Lives |
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liltomboi chapter 10 . 2/7/2017 Dang, this is a good story! |
ScandalN2Deep chapter 11 . 1/11/2017 Did they both just have a birthday? They are both a year older in chapter 11. |
ScandalN2Deep chapter 3 . 1/10/2017 I like the story but I need an explanation. In chapter 1, Abbie is 13Ichabod is 19. That make him 6 years older. In chapter 3 it says Abbie is 23Ichabod is almost 33, a 10 year difference. May be he should be 23 in chapter 1. |
Frokiattacks chapter 13 . 12/18/2016 oh this Cliff hanger |
Guest chapter 13 . 12/16/2016 Loving this |
Guest chapter 13 . 12/8/2016 You can't just end the chapter at that part! Loving the story so far |
liltomboi chapter 13 . 12/7/2016 Can't wait! Hurry! LoL! |
Phoenix615 chapter 13 . 11/14/2016 No rotten tomatoes, just beautiful flowers. I have been enjoying this fic. For a moment i thought you had abandoned the story. So glad you are back at it. The attraction between these two is so strong and palpable! The angst is deep so much is in their path everyone around them has an agenda. I Am Looking forward to reading how you are able to finally bring them together, awaiting your next installment. ️ |
myhiggins25 chapter 13 . 11/12/2016 Like I said before I really enjoyed the chapter! The kiss was awesome and awkward and cute all at once. Danny Danny Danny. Back up dude and let your sister live! Buuuut... Crane might be accidentally ruining everything for them all on his own! haha Loving the conflict, the love, and the draaaaama |
LaJoyMechell chapter 13 . 11/12/2016 Welcome back ...it's been a minute, but more than enough time for life to show its true colors. It's crazy how much has happened between my last reading and now, but either way I'm just happy to see an update . Jenny and Abbie are sister goals , lol. Jenny voulunterring to spy on her sisters crush was so cute . And a CPR class that allows actual mouth to mouth contact ? Abbie better be glad they were dong it at that time , lol. When I was in EMT school we weren't allowed , we had to use dummy's and mask , even with actually patients, due to safety protocols we have to use mask. But I'm glad that she got a kiss and he reciprocated , even if she was a few months shy of legal, lol. I loved their vibes and natural conversation . It didn't seemed force or anything , which is kind of hard when there's no chemistry . Fortunately these two have plenty . I was going to say that Danny was messy for spying on his sister, but then I read further and I was like uh oh...crane has some explains to do . That could be a deal breaker right there. A major one . |
myhiggins25 chapter 12 . 10/6/2016 BAD MOVE ICHY! Woooooo Zoe is probably cooking up some drama tonight! LOL can't wait for their meeting... and an eventual date hopefully! |
myhiggins25 chapter 11 . 10/6/2016 oh lord here comes Zoe to ruin the fun! |
myhiggins25 chapter 10 . 10/6/2016 Who is this cockblock extraordinaire William?! He needs to back off our Abbie! Of course all the guys would want her. No surprise there! I mean she's a perfect angel. And All the lies from Ichy to Katrina I laughed! |
myhiggins25 chapter 9 . 10/6/2016 Lord lord lord Can Ichabbie just have a moment?! Lol life is happening and it won't wait for romance! THis chapter sucked me in |
myhiggins25 chapter 8 . 10/6/2016 why do I feel like Katrina is running a scam? lol |