I kind of ship them now :O

i like

just another great story from you this could go somewhere if you wanted I would definitely like to see where it would go

your one of my favorite authors

I really liked this little story, so thanks.

this would be a nice story don't ya think?

this is a great one shot that you could make in to a story all it own if you wanted to continue it I'd Read it

I kinda wish you'd continue with this. But none the less it was awesome.

You know, this would be a good start for a redux starting after the fall of Beacon. Maybe play up the distrust a bit more initially though.

Any chance of you continuing this? You laid a really nice base for a full story, though it's understandable if you don't