Reviews for Of The Five Elements
Raven097 chapter 12 . 8/3
Nice chapter
Hugo0974 chapter 12 . 7/26
Great fic!
Keep up the good work!
HeavenSpire12 chapter 1 . 7/21
Rat? Why Rat?
hinatanamikazesama chapter 12 . 7/21
Woww this is good i love
kamui5 chapter 12 . 7/20
Interesting chapter, what will naruto do next and how will Danzou be stopped ? Keep up the good work.
Uzumaki spiral chapter 12 . 7/20
Thanks for the new chapter.
Hope all goes well on your side.
draculyn28 chapter 12 . 7/20
good chapter
girrr chapter 11 . 6/9
Yes
girrr chapter 10 . 6/9
Nice nice nice very good
girrr chapter 9 . 6/9
Are you secretly kenchi?
dai sennin kurosaki d naruto chapter 11 . 2/21
ninjas don't need proof. ninjas figure out who's responsible for what & then they kill them. police & the courts need proof ninja can set it up to look like an accident, suicide, or even natural. i'm amazed so many ppl think they need proof.
dai sennin kurosaki d naruto chapter 7 . 2/21
ok the hiraishin creates no flash as we've seen several times in the anime. also FTG is a terrible translation for the name the translators were just too lazy to do it right or thought the proper name wasn't flashy enough. also danzo would allow the village to be maybe not 100% destroyed but he'd allow for a lot of destruction.
draculyn28 chapter 11 . 2/20
Very good chapter, I love history, I hope the continuation, greetings.
Time Parad0x chapter 11 . 2/19
So instead of helping Naruto to kill Orochimaru, Jiraija decides to just watch the fight.

WOW - that is just ... i have no words ...
Time Parad0x chapter 3 . 2/19
I dont get it -

They send one ANBU team to recon a base of Orochimaru an S-Rank criminal - and after finding out that the base is operational with enemies inside, they decide to go in ...

So far is not clear how strong Naruto here is but considering that Orochimaru was with him in the same room and Naruto didnt notice him pretty much screams not on Orochimaru level ...
so even all 4 of them combined would have had a hard time to survive an encounter with Orochimaru.
So in instead of report their findings with of an active base and request for reinforcements they go into the snake den - but what blew my mind was, that they even decided to split up.
Seriously ? This is pretty much the dumbest thing they could have done short of screaming that they are there ... and allowed for them to nearly be picked of one at a time.

And those are ANBU ?!
They seem more like lemmings to me -
With a death wish -

Then if this base is located in Earth country, they more than likely should have made sure that their presence isnt noted by them.
Not sure how your world works but having ANBU on your Soil is something i dont think would be tolerated.

So instead of what would have been the logical course of action kill all witnesses they free them handing IWA evidence ...
Even harder to swallow ...
Sure one of their members was captured with meant secrecy was already impossible to maintan but they only learned about this after they found Kuortsuchi at which point she already should have been dead ...
perhaps even had Orochimaru blamed for it ... After all the Tsuchikage thought the snake responsible ...
so by freeing Kurotsuchi IWA lost a major reason why the Tsuchikage would have gone after Orochimaru - someone Konoha wants dead -

Every Operative would have gone for that option - kill Kurotsuchi in Orochimaru base - blame him for her death and watch how IWA and Orochimaru destroy each other no matter who is left standing when all is over Konoha won ...
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