Reviews for The New Girl (Revised)
Abyss chapter 3 . 10/2/2019
This is a great story, I loved that you are dedicated enough to rewrite the story in a different fashion. Please keep up the good work and, can you please continue this story? Thank you!
Guest chapter 3 . 2/16/2018
Please right the next chapter. And can you make on the chapter when they lose there memory that danny loses her entire shirt and she has to wait until they get back and it makes the ride very awkward
DevilManiac chapter 3 . 1/19/2018
you could always refer to the original one for an idea on how to continue, or someone else could come to the rescue? idk im not that good when it comes to story ideas but i like this story's plot so far
917brat chapter 3 . 5/31/2017
This is very intresting and you have me curious as to just what is going to happen next, so please keep this up and update it soon because I can't wait to see just what is going to happen next..
RyssaTheReaper chapter 3 . 5/27/2017
I wonder how the league would react
RyssaTheReaper chapter 1 . 5/27/2017
This story is amazing
Bad Ass Poltergeist chapter 3 . 4/17/2017
I know it's been about a year but I really love your story, I read the original "The New Girl" and I would really love to know what happens. Love your stories
why-I-L0v3-801 chapter 3 . 2/7/2017
noooooooДi needs a update please update
AgentMcMuffin chapter 3 . 11/15/2016
Your stories are amazing and I wish you luck in your future endeavors man you are awesome
Danget the critic chapter 3 . 9/10/2016
So I like the new version, homage to the Red Hood and all. Although, I am not a big fan of Danny not having her powers for this, I understand the reason. Also please show the rest of the league's reaction to her getting kidnapped, I mean how many Heroines where near her and she was still caught. Wonder Woman would probably feel bad at least considering she let her new little sister get snatched like that.
Hopefully this will be more put together soon since I do enjoy the longer chapters.I have really enjoyed the rewrite so far especially the new Island arc in the last chapter.
Danget the critic chapter 1 . 9/9/2016
I think this is better than the other first chapter (referencing other story), and is an overall better start since adding the clockwork scene gave Danny both a reason to stay with the league as well as a reason not to work towards a way home just yet.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/7/2016
Uwaaaaaah, this is one of the most enjoyable YJ stories I've read! I also find it funny and unique that Danny was turned into a girl. xD I love every bit of this story! Though I was kinda sad that that magic thing on the Amazon island said he'd never be accepted anywhere.. :[ Poor Danny.
aDragonqc chapter 2 . 8/31/2016
first person ever to make packets man into an intense game
Phantom-Thunder chapter 3 . 8/24/2016
Harley Quinn rarely if ever refers to him as Joker especially not directly. Mr. J and Puddin' are typically what she calls him.
Nydac Pool chapter 3 . 8/18/2016
I really like this Revised version a lot better than the original, thank you for writing it.
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