I love how detailed you are about their emotions, but I'm still having a hard time picturing the scenery itself.

There are some things that are still confusing but I'm hooked. This story is quite interesting, and I especially love the way you portray Ginny. I hope you have thw time to update soon. Best wishes :)

WHAT ARE YOU DOING? WHY IS THIS SO GOOD?

John Uskglass? Glendower? Fucking, HPMOR? I am so darkly delighted by this.

YOU HEAR ME? THIS IS INCREDIBLE. I half want to be like, UPDATE IT NOW but I know how deeply unhelpful that would be so I will say this instead: whenever the muse comes back to you, whenever you feel ready to update I am going to be so ready and excited to read it.

Oh my goodness, I am SO intrigued by this. Your Blaise is amazing, your Ginny strong and wilful and just excellent and as for LUNA...

Hooked. I am hooked.

I am confused here, I thought the story was going to be Tom possessing Harry and then Ginny trying to put things right again.

I like it either way, though... :D

Kudos to Labyrinth, Sarah and Jareth are some of my favourite characters as well. :D

Hello! I'm very much interested in this story, it seems well-planned and well-written; moreover, a Ginny/Tom romance where she is not always the abused prisoner with Stockholm syndrome is always a plus. I read your A/N and know that at least for some time you will not update this, but anyway when you will have time again I will gladly read your newest chatper!

I'm really interested to see where you go with this, so please continue

Oh, you ended on a cliffhanger! *shakes fist*

I love it when I can tell that a story has elements in it that is burrowed from other works, and researched. It shows that the author really pours their heart into it, and it's not just purely gratuitous writing. The concept of how Ginny is awakening Harry/Tom is original and I also how you write Ginny's inner thoughts. I can't wait to see more! I'm sure next chapter will be amazing too!

Very interesting. I'm definitely intrigued by the original premise of Tom being in Harry's body, and I'm excited to see what happens next.

oh, what an opening! seriously, this is a great first chapter. i'm left with more questions than answers in a great way. how did this come about, what are ron and hermione doing, what is tom's-soul-in-harry's-body doing? i'm also interested to see how you're going to approach the structure and narrative of this story. i can see it going several ways - all of them great.

so far, i'm really digging ginny. she's a warrior and a leader, but she's also not used to being the hero of her story ("Can you think of anyone - anyone in the world - with more experience?" "It's you!" [Luna'd] said to Ginny, sounding pleased, as if she'd worked out the solution to a puzzle.") and is coming to grips with what a fight without harry means for herself and everyone.

while tom/ginny isn't quite my notp, it still makes me uneasy occasionally. i say that not to judge or throw shade on the ship but to let you know that if i ever drop off reviewing this story, it's for personal reasons only and not a reflection on your writing!

awesome chapter so far! Can't wait to read the rest of it! It's nice to see a Luna that's not dumb for once. Thank You

Looks like a very promising story but so far the plot is confusing to me. Looking forward to reading more.

Love the start. Your writing is good (liked the way you incorporated the flashback scene), but it is your characters that made this first chapter stand out. Ginny and Luna sound exactly like Ginny and Luna, and Blaise is fun to read about. Not much indication as to the plot, but I'm sure it would be just as good.

One note: I dislike the "keeping magic in reserves" stuff. In the books, Magic is an intrinsic part of the wizard and isn't limited quantitatively. Making it limited seems like an artificial restriction to create conflict and I wish you'd do away with it.