I'm not really sure about naming her Elizabeth. Maybe each member of the straw hats can pick a few names of their own, then they put all the names together and let her decide, and it would be a huge deal for her because because she use to be a slave and stuff, I don't know.

Besides that little nitpick, I quite like the story and you seem to be able to keep every character IN character which is something you don't always see on this website. Keep up the good work.

I love their interactions with her. Also love how you put the way Zoro thinks. Would love for the next chapter to come out soon! *wink wink nudge nudge*

Very good very good more please and soon pretty please

this is amazing and adorable and I love the her clinging to zoro. it's so cute. does she have any devil fruit powers? or teach her to fight? this is cool and I can't wait to read more

Hmm, though cliché, I like this fic, so far.
I look forward to seeing how you approach this.
It's written well enough, so now I'm just curious about the actual plot. Good Luck with your writing.

- Kage

This might be one of my fav stories ever because it's just so well written. Plus I can just see Lusty sleeping while standing up.

This story is absolutely adorable. I'm sure Zoro will make a good older brother.

A good story so far, but... why in the world are the Strawhats afraid of regular Marines.
This plays after Dressrosa and Zou, so nothing short of a Marine Admiral should have been able to stop them.
Zoro alone should have been more than enough to take on the entire island if he wanted.

AWWW
Her attachment to Zoro and her immediate acceptance of the name Elizabeth just melted my heart. Great chapter. "Meatbun" made me laugh.

Wow, sweet story I'll be sure to stay tune

Reminds me of another Story plays "father".

I think Zoro has a soft spot for children (chopper, or the kids in Water 7) maybe he should show that more often :)

Like i said before, very interesting story. Thank you for writing it

Very interesting story, I like how it is written too.

One thing! I dont think that Zoro is so noncaring like you describe him, I know its my opinion but maybe think about it.

Well, keep it up, you got a fav :)

hehehe so cute! i love this fic! XD!

I like the name, sounds nice.
Could you give some more description on her though?

looks promising, please continue c: