I came across this gem when I did a search using Caretaker. It was a very well crafted tale.

Another great story

This would have been a great addition to the episode! I really enjoyed it; thanks for writing!

Very well done. At first I was uncertain of how you were going to bring the story around but I think that is very much worked. And I especially liked the little bit about B'Elanna getting upset with the Chakotay.

Muito interessante faltou um pouco isso no show...

I hope that you mean to continue this a/u. It is an interesting perspective. Please write more and soon