"Excellently done, if God did all!" This was an incredibly well-written adaptation of what seems to be a wonderfully, intricately staged production of this show (one of my favorites!); I loved how well you wove your own clear and vivid character descriptions and poetic scene-settings in with the transposed dialogue and action. Beautiful work!

I like the hedge scene as well! Classic Sir Toby, one of my team mates is playing Sir Toby, and I think he's enjoying it a little to much.

Enter Malvolio, the stuck up idiot and the target of the pranksters of Illyria. Whose name also trys to auto correct to the word voicemail. :D

IT"S THE CLOWN! THE BEST CHARACTER OF THEM ALL! YAY!

My school is doing a film project where we rewrite a Shakespeare story in to a modern AU set in a current world event, so I thought to myself, "I wonder if there is any 'Twelfth Night' fan-fiction?" Sure enough, there is and I LOVE the idea your using! Keep it up! :)