SCGFDKSCGJLKEJRCGKSKLDJFXKSMFKDSJCGS AWWWWWW! I STILL CAN'T GET OVER THE CUTNESS OF HOW FRISK HAS SANS'S MOTHER'S FONT! CUTENESS OVERLOAD!

this is good

*ehem*
Cocaine is a helluva drug.

I'm new here and so far I like this a lot I hope it has a good ending

Natalie is the one who asks a reasonable question-why the heck are you jumping down a hole?! Interesting story thus far. The chapters being short are interesting.

The Dog's called Toby...breaking the fourth wall, are we? Or multi-verse conscious?

nice

So... Frisk is dead? but why...

I see Annoying Dog sleeping under the The End, and it looks like he is about to wake up...
Music is the expression of the soul Glitch.

Yaaay a glorious ending!

Don't worry Glitch, none of this happened. It was just a dream...
Ooooh...are they going to make fake veils(which is an an anagram for EVILS!) so they can smuggle the veil near Glitch and shove a veil that fills him with love? One with pink sparkles and silver hearts? (I don't know anymore)

This story is awesome dude. I think I've said it in past reviews, but I wanted to say it again. Keep up the awesome writing :3

Btw, I'mma be PMing you about adding an OC :3

InkSans954; can you add someone? Her name is Lúcida who is a female skeleton and human and looks almost EXACTLY LIKE SANS except she has a strand of black hair covering her non-magical eye and her magic is dark blue. Lucida DOES NOT BELONG TO ME SHE BELONGS TO MY BESTIE WHO JUST STARTED READING THIS! Also Lucida is sans daughter.

Frisk's font should be Airel so that frisk can speak in 3 fonts and outdo sans

Look up underverse. Simaler to this. Also I'm ending my reviews with Inksans954.