Nice start. I love Randy Cunningham: 9th Grade Ninja. It was an awesome show. I wonder who the scout work for anyway.

This fanfic really has potential... it's a shame that it appears to be dead. ;

This is really cool.
Heh and also when i saw 'Will Ryder', i instantly thought about Stranger Things: Will the missing kid, her mother interpreted by Winona Ryder; hope it's not a coincidence.
Like your story

Great 1st chapter

Looks like Viceroy's stepping up! I wonder if he'll go the 'Starscream' route?

I really love the story, I just have some have some constructive criticism .

You use semicolons incorrectly. Semicolons are used when breaking up a clause so you wouldn't have to use a full stop.

E.g.

Mary likes jam; Jill likes butter.

You sometimes use semicolons when you have to use colons.

E.g.

Here he is, the Ninja of Norrisville: Randy Cunningham.

Or:

Here's the plan: we meet up by the rendezvous at midnight.

You use a colon when stating a relevant fact. You use a semicolon as a substitute for a full stop.

There's nothing wrong with the story, I love it. I just want to help you improve with writing.

I'm usually very critical of OC's but I have to admit I'm intrigued. Though why does McFist want the Ninja dead still? The Sorcerer isn't there to reward him anymore... is he just obsessed now? Anyway, good job and nice chapter length

Wait ryder is weapon to destroy ninja and what plan viceroy have to him . Cool action have this chapter i like it . Please make more chapter

That is sad randy feel like despression and other thing is not right new guy get theresa . Please make more chap

I read the summary and SWEET CHEESE I'm already hooked! Not to mention this is a honkin' BRUCE prologue! Please, update again soon if you can! Also... NO ONE HAS ANY INFO ON THE CONFIRMATION OR CANCELLATION OF RC9GN SEASON 3! So, I would appreciate you not scaring me like that again unless you DO have confirmation and a URL to back it... because this show is my life. Sorry if that was harsh, but really, good job on this story. I look forward to reading more! Please, update soon ! :3

ahhhh this reminds me of spiderman so much I love it uvu. I'm so happy to see new stories even after the finale :D

HOLY CHEESE THIS IS GREAT
i havent read many RC fanfics in a while, but i re watched like one episode, decided to write one, so coming on and seeing this was fantastic!
keep up the awesome work!

Honestly can't wait to see more. I agree there should have been at least a third season.

Nice chapter to start the story. Though, Is there a new villain besides McFist and the sorcerer?...
Pls. Update soon *-*

Sound super cool and interest too, and also i hope randy is ok and also i hope them find randy too. Please make more chapter soon .:)