Reviews for The Oncoming Storm
Hearteyesmf chapter 5 . 2/1
Lindsey is such a great character, I love that she’s not the typical OC. I have to say I had her pegged as more of a Slytherin than Ravenclaw with all of the manipulating she does. Hopefully you’ll come back and update this story eventually, it’s way to good to be abandoned!
animemangaobsessed chapter 1 . 12/27/2019
Lmao! This chick does not pull her punches, taking being a bitch to a new level! Can't help but respect her though...
mrs. morgan 35 chapter 5 . 12/20/2019
more please
I Love My Brown Eyes chapter 5 . 9/12/2019
Wow! I love this story! Its so well put together and the MC is a riot! I hope you come back to this again one day!
Mabel chapter 5 . 9/3/2019
Please come back. I wanna see them break the No Making Out in the lab rule.

But for real your writing is amazing please don't leave us hanging
highlander348 chapter 5 . 5/9/2019
Is this story dead? Are you dead? :(
Celestial Ink chapter 5 . 11/24/2018
I know it's almost been a year but... a girl can dream right? Please please please update. This is way too good to be forgotten about. I love the character portrayal, everytime I read this I thinkLindsey is a real snake... I love it". And I really do love it because I get to see her development and her warming up to everyone around her. This is just awesome. So please, please, PLEASE update this. I look forward to it. Happy writing!
SakiHanajima1 chapter 5 . 11/15/2018
“See you all in a Flash.”
More like.. ima be slower than the turtle in posting new content.
I kid. I kid... but seriously. We totally need more of this, i need to know how this all is going to develop and whatnot. Cause obviously at some point she’s gonna know he’s the Flash and ughhhhhh... we need more!
Badumtsh chapter 5 . 7/27/2018
Love it. And would love an update at some point in the future.
Zhalo Shadowcell chapter 1 . 6/1/2018
hoping for a chapter sometime before Christmas lol
feel real chapter 5 . 1/5/2018
Hey, this story is so good ! Please I need a update now ! :)

xxo
C. S. Stars chapter 5 . 1/4/2018
This is such a great fic. I love it! I have yet to find any other wel written Flash fics. Amazing job :)
SunshineBubbles chapter 5 . 1/4/2018
Fantastic chapter, I’m totally shipping Barry and Lindsey so hard.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/27/2017
No one should like this protagonist.
She has hoped a man remain in a coma, hopes Barry has Brian damage, and manipulates everyone. She is a totale fake.

She is callous and very self-entitelt. Very egoistisk.
She has no regard for others.

I do not want Barry ending up with someone like that. She is clearly not a good person. She is a mean bitch, and not in a good/funny way.
She is emotional abusive already, I don't want to imagine what she would be like in a relashinship.

Not that i am going to read anymore of this story, or any of your other work (if you have any).

I find no redeming kvalities in your original characher. She is a characher i dislike, and were she a real person, I would despise her.

I cant enjoy a story where I hate the protagonist. And I wonder how anyone, ANYONE, could like reading this.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/24/2017
don't listen to the flamers, lindsey is 3D and sassy and flawed, and thats what makes her interesting. please update soon
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