I'm not sure where to start. The chapters posted average out to being under one-thousand words. There is a lack of proper capitalization, but also way to much reliance on dialog. The characters are OoC, what with Robin sharing things to easily, but also him and Artemis instantly falling in love rather than in a natural manner. Wally acts younger than he is, and then you turn around and have Artemis do something super cruel that a person would never, ever do to a friend - use them as a rebound. Yet, why is there even a need to be a rebound. Dick's supposed to be super scarred, yet in canon there is a beach episode where he's only in swim trunks and nobody reacted. The plot is "plot what plot". It switches POV multiple times in each chapter.

When you write, you need to plan out your stories, let the characters direct the story rather than making them do things they would never do, but also use grammar to the best of your ability. The capitalization issue is something you should have been able to catch on your own, and even if that wasn't true, a good word processing program will do it for you.

P.S. Yes, I get the fact this is your first fic, but you honestly can do better. Good writing takes both hard work and time, but you don't rush things even if you are excited about getting out your first story.

WTF?!
RobinxZatanna

Yay, Traught

MORE PLZZ. Wait what will wally think of artimis and robin

OMG