For the question a guest left. It's because I'm form Austria, and in Austria you are an adult when you turn 18teen.

You are allowed to vote, to drink or drive, you must pay taxes, school ends and you can start working or going to university (I think in the US that's collage).
You move out of your home (and in Austria you only move like 3 or for times, and the first time is when you leave your parent's place), and you basicaly count as an adult in front of the law.

So yes, for me the mindset is just the same that 18teen means you are an adult. I hope that helped, Love ChandraMigina

Why do you keep referring to Harry as an ‘adult’? He’ an 18 year old schoolboy.

I just thought I'd leave a review by means of telling you that... I LOVE YOUR STORY! IT IS REALLY GOOD! AND YOU DID SERIOUSLY AWESOME WITH IT! Just wanted to tell you. :)

DON'T STOP BEING SERIOUSLY AWESOME YOU AWESOME WRITER!

A FAN-READER! Anna :3

meh. your writing style is very nice and it was very well written but I couldn't finish it because of the rape vibes it was giving me... :( sorry. I clicked it because it seemed very interesting but how harry didn't want what was going on and how draco kept describing him as prey. :( yeah no and then you said harry was his mate... nope sorry. I ship it all the way but the way draco treated harry wasn't how I pictured a mate to act. especially when harry started freaking out. waaaay to rape vibes for me. sorry. but good job with your writing! this is what I look for, well, the writing style at least... I just hope this review doesn't make you angry... just could you put up a warning for uh non consent for the first um time? I'm kinda disappointed... sorry.

Loved it

Hey :),

I liked reading this OS, but, there are lots of mistakes, it's a shame...

One mistake that made me cringe, is that Harry is younger than Draco, Ron and Hermione... Actually, Hermione is the oldest, then, it's Ron, then Draco (born June 5th) and finally, Harry. So, everytime you wrote "older" when refering to Harry, I would grimace.

Though, for a non-English, you know how to deal with your work, and that, I appreciated :). Overall, your OS was quite interesting and the fact that Harry became a vampire after Draco was great .

Anyways, keep the good work, bye!

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I liked your story very much and didn't mind the spelling. I did get confused sometimes when you didn't use names. "Youngest weasley" for Ron (even though that's Ginny), oldest gryffindor for Ron, (even though that's hermoine...) it was confusing who you meant sometimes.

I liked it. There are some words throughout that are wrong. Many are similar spellings to different English words or aren't the right tense. I still understood what you meant. The best thing that would help is finding a beta that knows the nuances a bit better. So many people that only know English can't spell or write correctly, so be careful about who you ask.

You did a wonderful job. You've got a better grasp of the language than some native speakers. I did notice a few errors, but they're ones that I have to use spell check myself to fix. The only problem is that they're really close to the right word so they're hard to catch: defiantly/definitely, curios/curious, composer/composure. I really liked Harry's interactions with his friends at the end.