Good chapter! Will you be continuing this story past the first season by the way?

Another amazing chapter, thanks for the update

Wow, considering Moira actually tried to do something good by working with Detective Lance in this story, Oliver was pretty cold! And she and Frank are going to be out of their minds with worry when they realize Thea and Amanda are out in the city tonight of all nights.
Shame that Merlyn was prepared with a decoy. I wonder how he figured out they would be there. He also seems to know they know his identity, which makes me a little worried for Tommy. I’ll be very interested to see how this all ends. Good update!

I really enjoyed this chapter, it’s a great set up to the finale!

Oh this was a fantastic chapter! Love this whole story, thank you for updating. Take care and stay safe. Read ya Later ;)

Awesome! Can't wait for part 2!

I’m so glad you updated, this was a great chapter! Everything seems to be moving quickly and I’m very excited to see how it all turns out

Good chapter! Have Laurel and Oliver had sex at all with each other yet? How much time has elaped in the story so far?

Nice to have a new chapter.

I guess Malcolm just could not keep his mouth shut but he always was a pain so not surprise

Très bonne histoire continue

OMG thanks for the update, I've been waiting for this for a while now. Hope to see more update from you in the future.

Absolutely incredible story so far! I hope that you update it at some point! If you do, I can't wait for the next chapter!

This is extremely well-done. I think you moved the pieces from season 1 around in a way that made sense and best fit the flow of your story. I also loved the characterizations and the relationship dynamics. I completely understand real life often gets in the way, but I hope you'll find time for this story in the future. Excellent job!

I’m so excited you updated! Hopefully that isn’t actually the last we’ll see of Sara, it seems a bit anticlimactic for her to die before Laurel can even really speak to her. Also there’s a lot that’s still unclear about what Sara was doing back home in the first place. Can’t wait to read the next chapter, update soon please!

OMG I've just been re-reading the previous chapters from this fic for the past week or more (cause I've missed it so much) and I saw this update! I wasn't even expecting. I love the new developments here (finally) and some others I'm not sure. FYI I already knew it was Sara but while I wanted her to lose I did not want that to happen. I'm so conflicted. Poor Laurel and poor Tommy; he just learned a whole lot of secrets.