Sicko

Holythis is the best thing I have ever read

HOLYFUCKARONI that was amazing that was perfect

Well written. I love your oneshots, and hope to see more of them in the future. Have you ever thought about expanding to longer multi-chapter pieces? I know they're a lot to manage, and many go abandoned, but I'd love to see where you'd bring an attempt like that.

Your writing is truly beautiful and I honestly wish I had the ability to craft emotions like you do. As this is a one-shot, I don't have much to say about it but I can say that despite its M rating, this story is not destroyed by its sexual elements. In fact, it adds a layer of complexity to the characters by describing Luxa's yearning for Gregor that has evolved over the years. And it also very nicely demonstrated Luxa's uptightness and her longing to break away from that. Overall, there's really not much to say except that it's a good story that sadly won't get much attention due to its rating. You can be so proud of your work, though. Like I said earlier, I wish I was able to craft such a brilliant spectrum of emotions

Well... I already reviewed this but I know what review whores you and I each are. I think this was a very good story, with images that had to bounce back and forth between present past and possibly even future. I like when you don't have to know what the hell the story is really understand a one shot.