So I'm guessing this fic was abandoned?

Great stuff! I hope you will write more.

This story is very interesting so far and I'd love to see more! I like the concepts you've used like how she made that cigar and the dust in her footwear. Please continue with more!

What an interesting paring! I never would have thought of it! I love the story and I'll be eagerly awaiting the next update with bated breath.

What a creative story idea! I never would have thought of this and it's really well written! Look you have me all excited now. I'll await your next update with bated breath.

I was wondering if the name Velvet chose for her fake name meant something or was just random. XD

Those semi-colons in your first paragraph are both grammatically incorrect. The first one should be a comma, and the second one should not have any punctuation separating the two parts of the sentence.

It sounds like Velvet really has no clue how much attention she was drawing...

WHAT. She made a cigar out of Dust? O_O

You have an overabundance of semi-colons in this fic. It's really noticeable because you used so many of them and a lot of the time you've used them incorrectly in places that just need a comma.

[too small curved brown ears] - I'm not sure if you typo'd "two" or really meant the ears were too small here...
I'm still not even sure what velvet's current weapon is supposed to be. It's something different from her camera, right?

You really like odd pairings for Velvet, huh? Velvet and Roman, I have to see how THIS is going to go down...

Ooh, Velvet's going on a secret mission!

[she had pretty much melted into the backdrop] - background. Backdrop is a stage prop with scenery on it.

So she's going to be replaced another faunus and everyone is going to pretend that person had been the fourth member of her team all along?

Ooh, it's a deep-cover mission to infiltrate the White Fang!

Having the secret message be written in her coffee foam was a neat idea.

O.O Velvet killed people. I mean, they attacked her and they certainly deserved it, I just didn't think she was actually going to do that...

[The sound of clapping shatters...] - For this whole paragraph you switched into present tense, when the rest of the fic is in past tense.

So now they've met and Roman definitely seems interested in her...

Haha! This is interesting! Sure, the pairing seemed odd, at first... But the plot, it's great! And well written.

Well, good luck and happy writing!